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Mar 27th, 2007 at 10:19 PM
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A Paradox
Cutting up
Covering up
Hiding the pain
Feeling the strain
Quiet and pensive
Bold and defensive
Happy-go-lucky
Often feel yucky
Fish trawling
Skin crawling
Advice is followed
Pride is swallowed
The peacemaker
The deal breaker
go to #3
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I often feel there are two individuals inside me and your poem seem to fit. Thank you for sharing mel.
The world is full of magic things waiting patiently for our senses to grow sharper.
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I feel like that some days. Thank you for sharing your poem Mel.
Last edited by ksgardnr; Apr 10th, 2007 at 11:21 AM. Reason: can't spell
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You can really make us feel with you, Mel! Your poems are fantastic!
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Thanks Diane. I find it much easier if I forget about the rhyming stuff.
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